bonding: correct spelling and grammar

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.. _bond-interface: .. _bond-interface:
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the :cfgcmd:`hash-policy` option, documented below. the :cfgcmd:`hash-policy` option, documented below.
.. note:: Not all transmit policies may be 802.3ad compliant, particularly .. note:: Not all transmit policies may be 802.3ad compliant, particularly
in regards to the packet mis-ordering requirements of section 43.2.4 in regards to the packet misordering requirements of section 43.2.4
of the 802.3ad standard. of the 802.3ad standard.
* ``active-backup`` - Active-backup policy: Only one slave in the bond is * ``active-backup`` - Active-backup policy: Only one slave in the bond is
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This option only affects 802.3ad mode. This option only affects 802.3ad mode.
The default value is 0. This will cause carrier to be asserted (for 802.3ad The default value is 0. This will cause the carrier to be asserted
mode) whenever there is an active aggregator, regardless of the number of (for 802.3ad mode) whenever there is an active aggregator,
available links in that aggregator. regardless of the number of available links in that aggregator.
.. note:: Because an aggregator cannot be active without at least one .. note:: Because an aggregator cannot be active without at least one
available link, setting this option to 0 or to 1 has the exact same available link, setting this option to 0 or to 1 has the exact same
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This algorithm is not fully 802.3ad compliant. A single TCP or UDP This algorithm is not fully 802.3ad compliant. A single TCP or UDP
conversation containing both fragmented and unfragmented packets will see conversation containing both fragmented and unfragmented packets will see
packets striped across two interfaces. This may result in out of order packets striped across two interfaces. This may result in out of order
delivery. Most traffic types will not meet this criteria, as TCP rarely delivery. Most traffic types will not meet these criteria, as TCP rarely
fragments traffic, and most UDP traffic is not involved in extended fragments traffic, and most UDP traffic is not involved in extended
conversations. Other implementations of 802.3ad may or may not tolerate conversations. Other implementations of 802.3ad may or may not tolerate
this noncompliance. this noncompliance.
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be given for ARP monitoring to function. be given for ARP monitoring to function.
The maximum number of targets that can be specified is 16. The default value The maximum number of targets that can be specified is 16. The default value
is no IP addresses. is no IP address.
Offloading Offloading
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! !
.. note:: When using EVE-NG to lab this environment ensure you are using e1000 .. note:: When using EVE-NG to lab this environment ensure you are using e1000
as the desired driver for your VyOS network interfaces. When using the regular as the desired driver for your VyOS network interfaces. When using the
virtio network driver no LACP PDUs will be sent by VyOS thus the port-channel regular virtio network driver no LACP PDUs will be sent by VyOS thus the
will never become active! port-channel will never become active!
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