l2tpv3: correct spelling and grammar

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:lastproofread: 2021-06-30
.. include:: /_include/need_improvement.txt
.. _l2tpv3-interface:
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Layer 2 Tunnelling Protocol Version 3 is an IETF standard related to L2TP that
can be used as an alternative protocol to :ref:`mpls` for encapsulation of
multiprotocol Layer 2 communications traffic over IP networks. Like L2TP,
L2TPv3 provides a pseudo-wire service, but scaled to fit carrier requirements.
L2TPv3 provides a pseudo-wire service but is scaled to fit carrier requirements.
L2TPv3 can be regarded as being to MPLS what IP is to ATM: a simplified version
of the same concept, with much of the same benefit achieved at a fraction of the
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Set the IP address of the local interface to be used for the tunnel.
This address must be the address of a local interface. May be specified as an
IPv4 address or an IPv6 address.
This address must be the address of a local interface. It may be specified as
an IPv4 address or an IPv6 address.
.. cfgcmd:: set interfaces l2tpv3 <interface> remote <address>
Set the IP address of the remote peer. May be specified as an IPv4 address or
an IPv6 address.
Set the IP address of the remote peer. It may be specified as
an IPv4 address or an IPv6 address.
.. cfgcmd:: set interfaces l2tpv3 <interface> session-id <id>
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.. cfgcmd:: set interfaces l2tpv3 <interface> peer-session-id <id>
Set the peer session id, which is a 32-bit integer value assigned to the
Set the peer-session-id, which is a 32-bit integer value assigned to the
session by the peer. The value used must match the session_id value being
used at the peer.
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tunnel-id 200
}
Inverse configuration has to be applied to the remote side.
The inverse configuration has to be applied to the remote side.
Over UDP
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